This time I'll present a 2-part poem which features non-diagonal kennings.
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a concert outdoors
the code of behavior
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the trees and bushes
steal sun and shadow
from one another
and
step on your toes trip you trip you
till you fall
into the narrow patch
of the meadow of slumber
... you HEAR
the sheets
attached to branches and shoots
by clothes-pins
the sheets of music ...
silence
wakes you up
the guys under the tree
clean instruments
alright you clap
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Small Girls
Have Great Future
the sky of May
punishes the audience
a small girl
knows none of that
the orchestra breathes
under the oak
the girl follows her yellow and black
pacifier the propeller must be rotating
too fast to see
she sounds
like a small bee
20 years from now
she'll marry
a devoted bear
wh ©
1991-05-05======================================
I am much more interested in diagonal kenning than in the non-diagonal ones. Since people tend to confuse them, I have decided to list both kinds, and to separate them. Most of the time the distinction is very clear, the obscure cases are relatively rare.
Non-diagonal kennings:
the code of behavior
the meadow of slumber
the sheets of music
the sky of May
For the sake of convenience, let me collect the kennings from the previously posted poem ("6000 feet"). There were two, and both were diagonal:
Diagonal kennings:
- stars' backyard -- mountains or a town up in the mountains;
- God's toys -- church buildings.
Actually, there was also one non-diagonal:
One can see already from the above 5 examples of non-diagonal kennings that they represent several different semantical constructions, and they also have various relation to the common language--e.g. the expression "
grass lawn" is simply a part of the common English, and "
the sheets of music" is almost like that too. However, there is a dramatic difference between the usage of the two in the respective poems.